回复weiz发表于：2006/10/19 14:37:00悬赏金额：
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总讨论英译汉，大家来尝试一下汉译英吧，看谁能翻译的信→达→雅！
余光中先生很有名的一首诗——《乡愁》
小时候，乡愁是一枚小小的邮票，我在这头，母亲在那头。
长大后，乡愁是一张窄窄的船票，我在这头，新娘在那头。
后来啊！乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓，我在外头，母亲在里头。
而现在，乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡，我在这头，大陆在那头。
大家也可以单独翻译某一句，最后凑成完成的译文。
wrliao 回复于：2006/10/25 10:23:00转帖两译版：
版一
When I was a child, my homesickness was a small stamp
Linking Mum at the other end and me this.
When grown up, I remained homesick, but it became a ticket
By which I sailed to and from my bride at the other end.
Then homesickness took the shape of a grave,
Mum inside of it and me outside.
Now I’m still homesick, but it is a narrow strait
Separating me on this side and the mainland on the other.
版二
Homesick
For youth,
Homesick was a tiny Mail Stamp,
I was on one corner,
Mother’s on the other;
As grown-up,
Homesick became a narrow Ship Ticket,
I was on one end,
My new-wed on the other;
Later, oh, later,
Homesick was a short Tomb Stone,
I stood in the front,
Mom’s buried behind；
Now-a-day,
Homesick becomes a shallow Ocean Strait,
I am on one side,
Mainland home is on the other.
原文由 quanbaogang 发表:
这么文雅的事情我可做不来，还是各位版主妹妹厉害
你们都是化学专业英语毕业的吗，怎么这么强 |
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wyxwyx 回复于：2006/10/19 17:01:00
原文由 weiz 发表:
总讨论英译汉，大家来尝试一下汉译英吧，看谁能翻译的信→达→雅！
余光中先生很有名的一首诗——《乡愁》
小时候，乡愁是一枚小小的邮票，我在这头，母亲在那头。
when i was a child, homesickness was a small stamp, i was at one end and mother was at the other one.
长大后，乡愁是一张窄窄的船票，我在这头，新娘在那头。
when i grew up, homesickness was a narrow ticket, i was here,and my bride was there.
后来啊！乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓，我在外头，母亲在里头。
from then on, homesickness changed into a low tomb, i was outside, and mother was inside.
而现在，乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡，我在这头，大陆在那头。
and now, homesickness is a shallow strait, i stand here, my homeland is on the other side.
大家也可以单独翻译某一句，最后凑成完成的译文。 |
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